2. Factual statements that demonstrate the inherent fairness and
legal validity of the writer's position.
Statements of fact contain two types of facts --facts that
create a context for what happened and facts drawn from the law
on which you intend to rely. In crafting the factual statement,
you should strive toward making your legal analysis seem like
the only possible means of reaching a just result on the basis
of the facts.
A compelling statement of facts tells a story. Writing a
persuasive story involves thinking about how to frame the facts.
Chronology, by itself, does not make a story. Facts may be
organized into several patterns:
• when -- chronology;
• who -- people or institutions such as the parties, government
agencies, witnesses, experts;
• what -- things such as medications, assistive technology;
• where -- location, other geographical context of an incident
such as a board and care home;
• why -- explanation or motive for events such as
discrimination, greed, bureaucratic inertia.
Factual statements present a golden opportunity to present the
equities of your case. Although you can't characterize facts or
draw inferences from the facts in the factual statement, you can
allow inferences about the equities to emerge inevitably in
readers' minds as their own response.
Indicators:
• Statement advances the case theory.
• Statement contains sufficient context facts and all legally
significant facts. Immaterial facts are omitted.
"Just the Facts, Ma'am" from The Writer's Block by Nancy Lawler
Dickhute. The Nebraska Lawyer.
January 2003.
The legal writer can learn a thing or two from Sgt. Joe Friday’s
methodology when tackling the fact section of a brief.
Professor Dickhute describes 8 principles that allow you to do just that. |
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